tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7814771751990061325.post8775782342012221631..comments2023-11-26T01:21:35.860-07:00Comments on Mormon Mommy Writers and Friends: Help PleaseMarianne (Mare) Baker Ballhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03663143060069193124noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7814771751990061325.post-35487758692805965572009-12-06T18:09:36.522-07:002009-12-06T18:09:36.522-07:00I'm with everybody else and your hubby! Go fo...I'm with everybody else and your hubby! Go for the normal guy--hehehe! I love it!<br />JenniJenni Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14340454147439103595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7814771751990061325.post-11724439680051414602009-12-04T10:31:34.468-07:002009-12-04T10:31:34.468-07:00Well, at first I was leaning toward the two super-...Well, at first I was leaning toward the two super-guys. But then my husband said, "C'mon, give a normal guy a chance." So after thinking about it, I feel like the second plot will probably be more interesting, and I'll probably go with that.Kristyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15228662085549417098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7814771751990061325.post-70930872048048878932009-12-02T16:58:56.157-07:002009-12-02T16:58:56.157-07:00Wow, Kristy!
Personally, the second plot has more...Wow, Kristy!<br /><br />Personally, the second plot has more tension and even has great potential to upping the stakes. Joe might think he's better than Kenny and picks a fight with him. OR! Kenny might have a chip on his shoulder and feel he is the better man and outdo the humble Joe? The choices Sally will have! You can have the readers believe one guy is the likeable one while the other is not until your surprise ending that the likeable one turns out to be the jerk. LOL. So which will it be?Elizabeth Muellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06028099814857743134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7814771751990061325.post-77342880900342617182009-12-02T01:06:01.741-07:002009-12-02T01:06:01.741-07:00I pick the first scenario. Sally chooses the desir...I pick the first scenario. Sally chooses the desire to follow her heart.Pallavihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14070630960943334793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7814771751990061325.post-76064307806756586142009-12-01T18:57:13.833-07:002009-12-01T18:57:13.833-07:00Maybe it should be like Superman, where superhuman...Maybe it should be like Superman, where superhuman guy is ACTUALLY the normal guy. Okay, not an option, I know. I like the second one. But only if the normal guy wins the girl.Christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05714394723532487643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7814771751990061325.post-59682911502998618272009-12-01T16:16:23.977-07:002009-12-01T16:16:23.977-07:00I pick scenario 2, super guy and regular guy, for ...I pick scenario 2, super guy and regular guy, for sure.Kimberly Jobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11968684955824178271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7814771751990061325.post-13882680419967602652009-12-01T14:12:54.957-07:002009-12-01T14:12:54.957-07:00I pick scenerio #1... I think between the two supe...I pick scenerio #1... I think between the two super humans!Tiffany -- the mommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14449871696761030450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7814771751990061325.post-90329063404037644702009-12-01T13:42:26.460-07:002009-12-01T13:42:26.460-07:00Ok, so in the first scenerio there is an empathy f...Ok, so in the first scenerio there is an empathy for Sally and her lack of returned love. In the second scenerio the sympathy is for Joe, therefore making him the main character in my thoughts. In both scenerios I do find myself drawn to Joe. Not sure why. I don't think the thoughts are overdone, they just need to be fleshed out a bit. I think it sounds intriguing.Nikkihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16328973674012805812noreply@blogger.com