Friday, March 2, 2012

Did you Remember?

So...it's March, and I'm sitting here with 5 pretty copies of The Wild Queen in print form. It's a great way to usher in a new month.

Last Friday I asked for your help with today's post. Did you remember? Are your brains sharpened and ready? I hope so, because, for me, nothing has changed. I'm still totally perplexed by the title of this particular project.

Here goes: Synopsis--15-yr-old Ruby's life was shattered when a distracted driver cut off her family's car--and ended the lives of her parents and older sister. Now she lives with her aunt, uncle and their kids, 1200 miles from home. Torn between depression at her loss and guilt for being the lone survivor, Ruby struggles with every day moments, including the perpetual bubbliness of her cousin, Merrilee. Add to that Ruby's new-found fear of driving and irrational hatred of cowboy boots, and you'll find yourself wondering--like Ruby--if life will ever be balanced again.

Okay, so the synopsis still needs work. I didn't have the time this week to fine tune it like I'd planned. But you get the point. Ruby is struggling in a strange town with family she hardly knows, fighting her own memories and her innate resistance to talk about the things that truly bother her. Her aunt, Lisa, well-meaning but poorly equipped, tries to help her by getting her into an art class. There she meets a boy who helps her see that life isn't as bad as she thinks.

Though I caution you, this is not a troubled-girl-finds-boyfriend-and-all-is-well kind of story. They do become friends, and they may eventually pursue a relationship, but it's his take on life that helps her, not "finding a man."

Now, about that title. At first, I wanted to follow one of the current trends of one-word titles, and was going for something that had to do with the point in her life where everything changed. I was thinking Intersection, but the accident doesn't happen at an intersection. So, Intersect--the point where two lines meet. My husband suggested simply Ruby, but I'm still on the fence about that one. I also thought about the phrase "Into everyone's life a little rain must fall" and took Rain Must Fall from that, but this is a YA story and I don't know how many YA readers even know that phrase. I also considered the geography changes. She goes from Orem, UT to Duncan, OK. Never heard of it? Good. I live less than 30 miles south of it. And we did live IN Duncan several years ago. My 3 sons were born at Duncan Regional Hospital. I've scouted out the area of town her aunt and uncle live in, and picked a style of house. Duncan, OK is so geographically different from UT that it's a perfect for the story. It's also part of Tornado Alley, and is an area of the US known for brilliant rainstorms and high winds (without the mountains as buffers).

I'm ready. Give me your title suggestions, please!

10 comments:

  1. I'm voting with the husband. Ruby is a pretty good title. Especially since it's about her personal growth. I thought about Ruby's Not OK...just to toss something out there

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  2. Personally, I like one word titles. I have several (unpublished *sighs*) books with one word titles. When I read your (very good) synopsis, I thought of SHATTERED, which has been used in other older books, but if this is an LDS publication, then it would work fine. RUBY has also been used, as per Amazon books. Or how about BROKEN, or CRAZED, which happens to the car's safety windows after broken into tiny, spider-web like lines in a crash.

    My current WIP is BUCKET LIST OF HOPE, Hope being the main character. So you could us a longer title with Ruby in it, and that would work fine, too.

    Okay, here is my pet peeve. When I read YAs, they all seem to have "love stories" in them. When you said that Ruby-meets-boy and they are "friends", and thought this is sooo refreshing. I can tell you right now my boys did not see every girl as a "girlfriend" when they were teenagers. They just didn't! I know, because we talked--frankly--about everything! So why do YA books where the main characters are merely 14 or 15-years-old fall in love? I didn't even get a crush on a boy till I was, maybe 16.

    Okay, I'm done venting. *deep breath* Yeah, I like one word titles.

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    1. I get your frustration, but I think a lot of it comes down to marketability, especially when the target audience is teeny bopper girls. Looking back on my journal from my early teenage years, it was all about boys, boys, boys. And let's face it, novels are just as much about escapism for teenagers as they are for adults. I think the key is to do what Cheri is doing here and try to sneak in some good life lessons along the way. My current YA has a love story, but a big part of the love story is the conflict it causes within the main character and how her feelings for a boy are distracting her from a much more important responsibility. One of my goals is to point out that boys aren't everything, and that sometimes ignoring your hormones makes you a more mature and strong woman. That doesn't mean she doesn't get him in the end, but it's not the point of the book, if you know what I'm saying. Just a nice bonus. :-)

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  3. Hmm ... well! Ruby is okay, and I like Rain Must Fall. I came up with a couple, like BROKEN BALANCE, DUNCAN'S RUBY, RUBY'S RAIN. It all depends on the people you want to hook. Titles are definitely one of the toughest decisions!

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  4. Wow, reading this has made me realize I need an ACTUAL title for my book. I've been just using my incredibly lame working title. But now I think I'd like to decide on a real title. Maybe I'll be writing one of these posts soon... LOL

    Let's see, another option you can consider if you like the idea of a one-word title is to invent your own word by combining two words into one, like SOULSTORM. That one's kind of awkward, but you get the idea.

    Here are some other suggestions: RAINFALL, FINDING RUBY, STORM CHASER, RUBY IN BLUE, REMAKING RUBY, AFTER THE STORM, HEARTLAND.

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    1. Oh, I love RUBY IN BLUE. With Ruby being a tone of red, and blue having a double meaning. Very cool.

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  5. Anything I came up with did not seem to fit. I do like simple titles though, so RUBY would work.

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  6. I thought of WRECKED. Being in tornado alley makes me think of TWISTED of combined WRECKED AND TWISTED however, I think those might have more of a paranormal or fantasy feel to them.

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    1. Wow. I hadn't even gone down that road. If it was paranormal I'd definitely go with TWISTED. That would be cool. Thanks!

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  7. Thank you, ladies! I got some title inspiration thanks, in HUGE part, to your feedback and suggestions. Ruby's story will be BY DEGREES. It has a compass reference (obscure) as well as a reference to her healing process (less obscure). Thank you!

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